ahstanford

Confusing focuis buit high quality. Pipes, plants, circuits, barcode, on and off swtiches and italic font. Do you see a focus point? lol.

Otherwise, its great quality, just kind of confusing. It doesn't represent digital art very well.

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Man1c M0g

Here's my self-critique:
I find the colours ok, but the green background just does not sit well with the lightness of the foreground. This problem cannot be easily rectified, however, due to the tubes which require a non-transparent graphic file to work correctly, and altering it all now would be a major chore. Still, these are all lessons for the future, and are pitfalls I will hopefully avoid in Biorust v4.

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Milkdrop

i think it rocks dude, easily the best work ever shown off on the forum.

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ConceptualMind

Gorgeous! :P

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Dart

»Yuneek... Think about the name of the site.

"Bio" - Living things
"Rust" - Metal, techy things

The theme is supposed to be the connection between those two things. Therefore Mog put both nature and tech stuff in the layout. Thats how I see it.

Oh yeah, good job Mog!

NeoLokie

it rules. stuff the focus points

Softballqueen21

Nice job! Its a bit different then the one now...very creative..nice work

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Kathryn69

I think its great, clean and easy to read.