Hmm i am not sure about this. First thing i noticed is that the text should come out more. If you look at the resized Preview you can`t read the headlines anymore(here on my laptop) but headlines are important. And maybe a shorter one would be better... maybe a real header with the name of the page? There should be something that catches your eyes... makes you stay and read the page. Maybe different Sizes for the Headlines will do it for the start. But the Layout, the BG and the Idea is nice. I would like to see the finished result