Culann

The text is good, but try to integrate the bolts a little more. They seem to be hovering in midair because the lighting on them is too strong. Also, see if you can find different bolts for each corner. The same rust spot on each one makes it easy to tell they've been duplicated. Coming along, but it needs some tweaks.

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Tamlin

My thoughts exactly. Also, the lighting on the bolts is coming from a different direction to how the lighting appears to be hitting the text, which makes the bolts seem "out of place". A good effort overall, though. Nice work with the text.

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HeartOfAPoet

Thanks for your comments and ideas! I really appreciate the feedback I will go back and tweak on the bolts and post the worked version when I'm done. Thanks again!