Rtouch

good picture but maybe you should get the grass in the foreground "blury" and getthe fountain sharp.

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themnax

actualy i think the way it is is saying something that the usual way, with the sharpness on the fountain, is kind of a cleche that is not.

of course i don't know what was intended, but i get the idea of laying in the grass because there no place else to go, and here is this fountain, that looks like someone who has no place else to go, seen through bleary, too long sleep deprived eyes.

refreshing to see one with water comming out of its arms instead of taking a piss too, although i like even better, abstract ones that don't look like anything human at all but have lots of interesting convolutions.

i can think of many ways the park itself could be improved upon, but the camera is somewhat limited to capturing what is there, with only a bit of futzing about the mood, what to emphasize and what to point it at.

i'm actual glad and prefer to see, even if it was unintentional, an emphasis other then what people too often take for granted to expect.

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tony2fla

What a great fountain, so much can be done with this picture.
nice shot

pshopper

The very front blades of grass could be blurred a little